Time Line (2nd Draft)

Patrick Kennedy moved to U.S./1948
John F. Kennedy born in Brookline Massashusetts/May 29,1917
John F. Kennedy commisioned into U.S. Navy/1941
John Kennedy had back surgery/1944
Kennedy served 3 terms in House of Represenatitves/1946
Kennedy got a Boston Based senate seat/1948-1950
Married Jacqueline Bouvier/September 12, 1953
Back surgery/1954
Back surgery/1955
Kennedy ran for Vice president and lost/1956
Had two kids Caroline Bouvie and John Fitzegerald Jr./ Caroline(1957-) John Fitzgerald Jr.(1960-1999)
Kennedy did Inaguration address/January 20, 1961-1963
Kennedys first major battle (Bay of Pigs) total faliure/1961
Kennedy signed treaty with Russia/June 10, 1963
Kennedy overthrew South Veitnams leader Ngo Dinh Diem/November, 1963
at 12:30 p.m. 2 bullets rang out/1963
Dead in Parkland Memorial Hospital/1963
Kennedy buried with a flame on his tomb (never to go out, they kepp the fire going)/ November 25, 1963

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